NightFire the Nightwing

by **NightFire** Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:12 pm

Name: NightFire
Nickname: Night
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Appearance: My dragon has a grey-to-black body, in which the tip of it's wings are black as well as the tail. My eyes are a glowing red with a white pupil, and my teeth has flesh and rotting bone in between them, but they are sharp for a dragon who loves to hunt. My talons are a yellowing white and are as big as a small human child, and my paws are as strong as a bull, and can handle any terrain. My wingspan is about 45 feet long and my body is 78 feet tall.
Personality: Serious yet kind, Stern yet also playful, Solemn yet happy, and I am not afraid to conquer any obstacle that is yet to come. I am always looking for adventure, and maybe, just maybe, for love. I care about everyone but myself, and everyone comes before me. I am trustworthy, caring, adventurous, and my skills are that of an Einstein. Just kidding, but I have been told that I'm smart. My sense of humor is dark, and sometimes it gets so wretched an adult would shed tears. I am not afraid of bloodshed and gore, and I am not afraid to kill anyone, even if it means killing my family, which I have already had to do against my will. I have no weaknesses, fears, or family. I am death, I am fear, I am NightFire.

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by **Chloe** Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:52 pm

welcome to our forum... but theres a flaw in your description.... you cant have NO weaknesses otherwise your classed as a mary sue and you havent got a full description... as in you need to compleate WHAT was given to you, no skipping over stuff, you nee to at least have ONE weakness and a few flaws, no ones perfect.

anyways nice appearence and welcome

by **Kazumi** Tue Mar 11, 2014 8:23 pm

Hello, Nightfire, I'm Kazumi, admin and Dragon Goddess of Harmony, and Twilight, NightWing Tracker Smile

NightWings are awesome.

I like your bio, but there are some flaws. Like Chloe said, you can't not have weaknesses. The template was probably cut off if you copied and pasted also, there's more in the template. Here's the entire thing:

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