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Zyra the Kind
Zyra is a kind, brave and smart dragon. She can be thoughtful of others, and will sometimes bring back gifts like flowers and shiny things to trusted ones. Although she will speak up if there is bullying and is not afraid to fight others of her age. She will respect older dragons though. She also like the moonlight.
Zyra doesn't have many fears, but there is one for certain. She fears that everyone might leave her and never come back.
Zyra's strengths are: Kindness, Bravery and quick thinking.
Although there is one weakness towards Zyra, being too kind.
Height: 4 ft. at the moment, 35 ft. when fully grown.
Her scale color is close to amethyst, but slightly darker. The design of them is pointed at the end, facing her tail.
Her eyes are a light violet, but not too light.
As of being a Hatchling, she has no weapons of her own. Her wings are leaf-like and match the colors of her scales. Her tail has fur at the end of it.
Family: She has never known her family. Her parents died protecting them from humans.
Normal Abilities: can manipulate the shadows. She is still learning what she can do.
Special abilities: Can sing others to sleep easily.
Combat style: N/A
History: Zyra doesn't have a lot of history. Her parents died protecting her from humans. She only knows this because of a friend of her parents that helped them fight, although she doesn't remember the name because of a head injury.
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Age : 17
Location : somewhere
-First, to prevent confusion I will ask you to label the information you listed as shown in the original template.
-Zyra will need more weaknesses to balance out her three strengths. Please elaborate how kindness can be a strength as well as a weakness. Can you tell us in the application how bravery is a strength as well? From how I see it, two of your strengths seem more like personality traits than advantages.
-Please elaborate on how your character can manipulate shadows. What can the shadows do? How long can she do this? Keep in mind that since your character is a hatchling, the ability cannot be as powerful as an adult's.
-Please elaborate on your special ability as well. You cannot send your opponents straight to sleep, but you can make them fatigued (although probably not much as you are a hatchling). How long can she do this? How many times can she do this every few posts? What is the effected radius?
Thank you for taking the time to read this and I hope we get to speak again soon!
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