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Post by farsight on Wed Aug 08, 2018 3:35 pm

[b]Type of Character: dragon

[b]Link to Character List Pagehttps://www.rpgdragons.org/t5273-orokiv-lists-of-charactures
[b]Name: farsight

[b]Alias: promethuem

[b]Age: 70  

[b]Gender: male

[b]Sexuality: heterosexual
 
[b]Personality: is quirky and can be a bit of a snob sometimes but is generally just there in the background. Will go into a panic sometimes when he wakes up from his nightmare also can get a bit stupid to when he wakes up.  

[b]Fears: fires

Strengths: can hid really well and get harder to find at night. Is stronger then some of the other dragons in physical strength  

[b]Weaknesses: fires and sharp weapons

Eyes: none

Appearance: has a black carapace with no seeable eyes or ears  

[b]Height: 90 feet tail

[b]Scales: has a black carapace instead of scales


[b]Appearance: has a barb tail and also has a black carapace exoskeleton
And also has spike like wings

[b]Tribe: rouge

[b]Inheritance: nightwing 50% /earthwing 50%

[b]Rank: n/a

[b]Family: n/a

[b]Mate: n/a

[b]Hatchlings: n/a

Abilities: can blend into the darkness.

accelerate the healing process by covering his wounds in mud

Has poisoned fangs

[b]Special Abilities: POWER OF NEO
uses a purple beam of mana that explodes in 10 foot radius when it hits something it has a recharge of a 4 post per 4 shots. Can make spike like wings to let farsight to fly for four hours that lessens after every beam by a post will also cause circuit like lines to appear all over the body that causes him to give a light purple glow when in use.

[b]Combat Style: sneak attacks and uses his tail and claws to attack and his acid from long range if he at a advantage

[b]History: farsight didn.t like to be in big groups of other dragons. So he became a rouge and wander from place to place always lurking in the shadows. Of others so he left the tribes to wonder the world.


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Post by Wake on Fri Aug 10, 2018 7:30 am

Ok. First up, all your bold code is missing the ending part that closes it.

Strengths: can hid better then the best hunters and get harder to find at night.
He can hide better better than the best hunter? Not sure how well that translates to being good at hiding. I would also think a purebred Nightwing Assassin would be able to hide better, so you may want to add something about that.

[b]Rank:

[b]Family: wip

[b]Mate: wip

[b]Hatchlings: wip
Rank should just have none or n/a. Also, if he has no family, hatchlings, or mate yet you should put none, not wip. You could also put available for mate.

Abilities: can blend into the darkness.
Uses underground sense to see others around him
Has poisoned fangs
Not really an issue if it was intended, but how does he fly if he can only see through the ground? Also, you should say how strong his venom is compared to an Earthwing, or what it does. Similarly, how well does he blend into shadows compared to a Nightwing?

[b]History: farsight didn.t like to be in big groups of other dragons. So he became a rouge and wander from place to place always lurking in the shadows. Of others so he left the tribes to wonder the world.
Um... This seems like one big sentence with periods randomly placed in. Not sure if that was the intent, but that’s how it reads.


[b]Special Abilities: POWER OF NEO
uses a purple beam of mana that explodes in 10 foot radius when it hits something it has a recharge of a 4 post per 4 shots.
Can make spike like wings to let farsight to fly for four hours that lessens after every beam by a post. will also cause circuit like lines to appear all over the body that causes him to give a light purple glow when in use.
I know you and Baldi talk about how this would work in combat, with flight being four post and losing one post per breath attack before recharging. If that’s how you wanted it, it should be stated in the ability.

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