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Personality:She is silly, smart, and bright. She has a shy side when it comes to groups. And she is full of energy. She prefers to be alone. SHe tends to stay away from other dragons.
Interests: Anything she sees
Dislikes: Mean Dragons and humans,
Fears: THe darkness
Appearance: She has dark black scales and blues eyes her claws are blood red and her fangs are razor sharp
Tribe Information and Status
Family: A lone female human.
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: She uses her wits to excape any situation
Special Abilities:She has yet to learn them.
Weaknesses: She is super shy and embarrasses easily.
Combat Style: needs training
History: She was born alone as her family abandoned her egg she always just stayed to herself and usual when a dragon nears she runs and hides.Until a young human found her and took her in. RP Sample:
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- SkyWing Hatchling
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Age : 22
Location : Pyrrhia
I'm Ark and looking at your character sheet you have made a good start, though I think it could use a little fleshing out. For example look towards expanding the personality a bit, also if your character is 1 its doubtful she would survive if she was alone, I would advise maybe a mother like type which she could get along with to care for your character.
I know this is turning into a list but improving your bio is a good way to learn to become your character which improves your RP. So I would look towards expanding Appearance too, like what's her build, tail, wings, any markings.... etc
Last of all, I would advise changing Mind reading into something that isn't too strong, since this is more like a god power. So I would say look into emotion reading or maybe presence detection.
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- God of Life and Seas
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Next question, and I don't mean to be rude, but how are you a NightWing if your fear is darkness? NightWings are pretty much living in darkness themselves...
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- Dragon Goddess of Magic
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