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Post by Sarah on Wed Jan 13, 2016 1:31 pm

Here is my dragon oc
Name: Sarah
Alias:Sara
Age: 1
Gender: Female
Personality:She is silly, smart, and bright. She has a shy side when it comes to groups. And she is full of energy. She prefers to be alone. SHe tends to stay away from other dragons.
Interests: Anything she sees
Dislikes: Mean Dragons and humans,
Fears: THe darkness
General Appearance
Height: 2"3
Scales: Black
Eyes: Blue.
Appearance: She has dark black scales and blues eyes her claws are blood red and her fangs are razor sharp
Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: None
Rank: Hatchling
Family: A lone female human.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: She uses her wits to excape any situation
Special Abilities:She has yet to learn them.
Weaknesses: She is super shy and embarrasses easily.
Combat Style: needs training
Background
History: She was born alone as her family abandoned her egg she always just stayed to herself and usual when a dragon nears she runs and hides.Until a young human found her and took her in. RP Sample:


Last edited by Alex Maxwell on Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:12 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : To change the oc to what the admin wanted as I thought about his or her request and accepted that I needed to change what was instructed.)
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Post by Arkhor on Wed Jan 13, 2016 2:28 pm

Heya there, Welcome to DRF

I'm Ark and looking at your character sheet you have made a good start, though I think it could use a little fleshing out. For example look towards expanding the personality a bit, also if your character is 1 its doubtful she would survive if she was alone, I would advise maybe a mother like type which she could get along with to care for your character.

I know this is turning into a list but improving your bio is a good way to learn to become your character which improves your RP. So I would look towards expanding Appearance too, like what's her build, tail, wings, any markings.... etc

Last of all, I would advise changing Mind reading into something that isn't too strong, since this is more like a god power. So I would say look into emotion reading or maybe presence detection.

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Post by Phantom on Wed Jan 13, 2016 3:14 pm

I know I'm not staff, but I'do also advise you to use the caharcter creation template with the correct fonts and other stuff I just forgot the name of. It's the basic guidelines we would like your character to follow.


Next question, and I don't mean to be rude, but how are you a NightWing if your fear is darkness? NightWings are pretty much living in darkness themselves... Razz

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Post by Cosmos on Thu Feb 11, 2016 5:47 am

No need to change fears or add font. Font is basically useless, lol

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