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Post by Ruin on Thu Mar 07, 2019 3:17 pm

A alt character that belongs to AlbinoWhite1.

Type of Character: Dragon
Personal Info
Name: Ruin
Alias: Chicken (A name that his hatchmates gave him to annoy when he was small. It was due to the fact that he had a fear of chickens when he was little. He's gotten over it though.)
Age: 1,500
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Asexual (He doesn't mind adopting hatchlings though. Hey, he's been in that position before.)
Personality: Ruins is a rather independent dragon who mostly thinks that he can handle most things by himself. At times though, he doesn't mind a bit of help. He has a very short temper, and has split emotions (due to ADHD and bipolar disorder).
For example he can be a happy-go-lucky lizard, and then 2.5 seconds later he's suddenly grumpy and annoyed.
Fears: Claustrophobia, decidophobia and Pistanthrophobia
Claustrophobia - extreme or irrational fear of confined places.
Decidophobia - fear of making decisions.
Pistanthrophobia - fear of trusting people.

Strengths: Ruin is able to keep his balance on the skies and on land almost perfectly. Water? Not so much. Due to his weight, he can crush rocks/boulders/etc with ease. He is mostly best in rock/lava/open areas. It's the best type of place for him to use combat. He is also sometimes unpredictable.
Weaknesses: Like all fire related dragons, Ruin is obviously allergic to water xd (not literally but you get what I mean).
He can get distracted easily, so mostly he attacks from all angles from the fact that he's a bit slow (especially if he's being ganged up by pesky monsters).

General Appearance
Height: 95F
Scales: Where his hard and thick scales are, they're mostly jet black (Running down from his face, neck, back to tail, horns, teeth, etc.) Where the black doesnt stand you can find shades of red and orange. (Like maroon and burgundy for example.)
Eyes: A glowing red orange.
Appearance:
Here's some refs:
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/ITCh8LhsZoU/maxresdefault.jpg
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/e9/e6/df/e9e6df6fddd3d2c87108c39c6a3ab0ad.jpg

Additional Roars/snarls/growls:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oBD63LTJDOA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPSx_cSPw_0

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Earthwing Tribe
Inheritance: Ruin is a hybrid of a Earthwing and a Firewing. 75% Earthwing / 6he rest is Firewing.
Rank: Earthwing Guardian.
Family:
Solfitier - Mother (Alive)
Rinscise - Father (Deceased)
Sol - Younger Sister (Alive)
Cleaver - Younger Brother (Alive)
Morrowserver - Older Brother (Deceased)

Mate: None.
Hatchlings: Not at the moment, but he's planning to adopt a hatchling at some point.

Skills and Abilities
Oh boy, here comes the hard part..
Normal Abilities: Ruin holds a poison bite which can be highly dangerous. Biting a victim would cause the following symptoms and time, depending on the size of the dragon.
Up to 3 posts for skywing and seawing sized dragons.
5 for Lightwing and Nightwing sized dragons.
7 for the rest of the dragons species.
10 for earthwing hybrids.
Acute and chronic pain (depending on where the bite is).
Continuing acid like burning of the skin/scales.
Unless the victim has some form of healing magic, immunity, or natural healing, then the poison would be delayed.
1 for skywing and seawing sized dragons.
3 for lightwing and nightwing.
5 for the rest of dragon species.
6 for earthwing hybrids.
Ruin has a fire/atomic breath of up to 1000F.
Special Abilities: When weak in combat, Ruin can go into a state known as his frenzy state. When that happens, the glowing emitting from the gaps in scales turn blue.
(Ref: http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130629192608/ultradragonball/images/b/ba/Cataclysm-deathwing-cataclysm-city-cool-dark-deathwing-dragon-fantasy-fire-red-warcraft-wings-world-of-warcraft.png)
He can release a atomic like breathe at this point, and only when he's weak in combat. Here's how it works.

Charge up - (When he's turning blue.)
He starts to breathe smoke first - Lasts for 3 posts.
Starts to breathe blue fire - Lasts up to 5 posts.
Total charge up. This is when he starts to actually breathe atomic breath. - Lasts up to 5 posts.
Cooldown, he breathes blue fire again. - Lasts up to 2 post.
Total cooldown. Frenzy mode ends. His glowing returns to its original color and he can't go frenzy mode again until 20 posts.

During a frenzy (And only frenzy), his scales are burning hot (up to 500 degrees). Might not wanna touch it unless you're really crazy or you're immune.
Combat Style: Ruin can somehow attack from nearly all angles (especially in a frenzy mode.) He mostly goes for points that are weak (neck, wings, stomach, etc.)

Editor Note (From Albino):
I honestly feel as though Ruin is a bit overpowering. I knew that the ability/ fighting part would be hard to balance, but I've tried. This is my second character btw. Oh well, It was fun to make. Now gotta wait for approval.


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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Wed Mar 13, 2019 5:32 pm

Yeah, this special ability is pretty OP... For ten posts, he has atomic breath and can also shoot it out of his back like lasers. That's a lot of radiation being spewed around, and on top of it, his scales will also be burning at 500 degrees. If someone can get close enough to go claw-to-claw with him, they wouldn't be able to do anything unless they had enough FireWing heritage to withstand a 500 degree burn.

Since his blue fire doesn't seem to be any different--it's just a normal fire breath but turned blue--I don't think it's necessary to mention in the charge up and cooldown. You could just say that while this ability is acitve, his fire is blue.

Having his scales burning at 500 degrees isn't too bad, I guess. Just seems like a lot when combined with the duration of the atomic breath and lasers. So you could keep that, and maybe bring the duration of the atomic breath down a bit, while getting rid of the lasers.

The only other thing that needs fixing is your last normal ability. Being able to withstand lava is a bit much since he is only 25% FireWing. Just being able to withstand hotter temperatures than non-FireWing heritage dragons (but less than pures or higher percentages, obviously) would be good.

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Post by Ruin on Sat Mar 16, 2019 9:18 am

Fixed.
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Sat Mar 16, 2019 1:56 pm

Good, but with the total charge up, you have that he has atomic breath, whereas under the cooldown phase, you mention lasers. Oh, and didn't notice this on the first read-through, but can you explain what the phobias he has are? Just so people don't have to look it up themselves.

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Post by Ruin on Sat Mar 16, 2019 3:17 pm

Fixed?
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Tue Mar 19, 2019 2:50 am

(Sorry for the delay. Busy couple days/spotty internet)

With the poison bite, I think you meant to say the symptoms duration would last for 5 posts instead of 10 if the victim had healing abilties/magic or resistance to poison. Unless you mean that it takes 10 posts for someone to feel the full effects? Needs a little clarification. Also, that time should be shorter for smaller dragons, obviously it would take less than 10 posts for the poison to work its way through their system. So, maybe like 3 posts for SkyWing and SeaWing sized dragons, 5 for LightWing and NightWing sized, 7 for the rest, and 10 for EarthWing hybrids.

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Post by Ruin on Tue Mar 19, 2019 8:37 am

I think that part is fixed.
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Sat Mar 23, 2019 2:03 am

Approved.

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