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Post by Morgos Jaakune on Sat Aug 25, 2018 1:48 pm

Type of Character: Dragon
Link to Character List Page: http://www.rpgdragons.org/t5317-nevermore-s-character-list#65386[/url]
Personal Info

Name: Morgos Jaakune
Alias: Oilslick
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Homosexual
Personality: Morgos is sadistic, manipulative, and sly. He often sticks to himself and lives solitarily in his ‘lab’(*cough cough* torture Chamber *cough*).  He’s secretive, and never gives out info unless he has to, or it’s something to do with the tribe. His test subjects usually consist of humans and monsters, and his tests are often fusing two utterly different beings together in spirit, quite difficult and taxing, but he puts up with it. He has a multitude of other tests and experiments meant to better the tribe, and the alliance, but focuses mainly on his personal goals. He doesn’t quite care for his test subject’s pain, and sometimes revels in it. These experiments are often supported by humans, who think they can control the combination of a human and monster energy, and Morgos often gets requests from humans to fuse a child with a monster. He obliges just to see how the experiment reacts and to study it when it’s among humans. Most dragons hate humans, Morgos shows no particular emotion that associates with humans and monsters, really the most he sees them as is pawns, along with other dragons and lesser beings, but he puts up the façade of acting towards humans like any other dragon, when he’s among dragons and humans. Morgos cares not for mates and children, he’d only do something such as that for practicality and to further manipulate and worm his way higher. Only his test subjects and other beings who’ve visited his lab has seen what kind of dragon he truly is, and even that’s just a sliver of his insanity and sadism. He keeps his allies close and his enemies closer, and uses the quote “keep your friends rich and your enemies rich, and wait to find out which is which” ~Marvel’s Avengers
His intelligence his much higher than the average dragon, along with his competence in magic. He basically was a child, well, hatchling prodigy. He uses this intelligence in pursuit of science, building up on what little there was among Pyyria (his extent is nowhere near what we have irl), Science is a struggle, and he usually combines it with magic to further his studies and make up new spells.  
Fears: Morgos doesn’t fear much, he really only fears his experiments will be destroyed and the research burned, never to be recovered. He’s slightly worried that his work will be discovered, and considered a perversion of magic, or unacceptable (not that that will stop him, but still).
Strengths: Morgos is good at the fledgling subject of science and magic, those are his specialties, and they include poisons and toxins. He’s skilled at stealth and speed (75-80mph), and not being found. His manipulation of others is also near perfection, and his apathy helps him create no bonds to be exploited by others. Morgos is observant, and uses info he finds for his own exploitation. He’s average at gaining the trust of humans, and is skilled at capturing and containing monsters. He makes sure he’s tied to no specific being/tribes/alliances. This can also be used against him. He mostly stays in the Order of Starlight because one; His natural enemies, the Lightwings, are there, and Two; being in an alliance gains him temporary protection, and ease of access to resources he needs.
Weaknesses: He underestimates others, and is arrogant, thinking himself above his ‘pawns’. He’s sensitive to light and anything divine (Magic of gods, semi-gods, demi-gods, and Lightwings) His body recoils when faced with divine magic, and his sensitivity to light doesn't help. Threaten his work, and you can easily keep him under your control (but he’ll most likely backstab you in the future). You can easily sway him to your side if your offer is good enough for him. He lacks in strength, and his power is mostly not made for combat. He's obsessed with magic, which he knows can be used against him.

General Appearance
Height: 35ft
Scales: Pitch black, and takes the likeness of an oil spill when in the sun.
Eyes: Solid orange eyes with a silted pupil, seeming to be faintly covered by an orange mist,  that  seem to spin with other shades of oranges and a dash of black like a kaleidoscope, or writhing mist, and they also give off an eerie glow.  
Appearance: Lean, serpentine, toned, black mouth, stinger-like spike at the tip of his tail, and a composed posture, he also has spines resting on the back of his neck that he can rub together, creating a sound much like the rattle of a rattle snake. These same spines run along the ridge of his back and end midway down his tail. Runes adorn his body to help with multiple things, such as hiding his presence, keeping his mind intact, and controlling the flow of his special power. He often wears a perpetual smirk on his muzzle, unless the situation calls for respect and solemnity.  

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Lightwings
Inheritance: Purebred Nightwing that is taking residence in the Lightwing tribe.
Rank:  Scholar
Family: Deceased
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A (unless you count his experiments as his children, he sure does)

Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: he can exhale sleeping gas, blend in perfectly with the night, and has excellent night-vision.
Special Abilities: Morgas has the ability to manipulate other living being’s energy, this does not help him in combat….yet… but if he builds on it he’ll be able to control that being’s energy for a max span of 15 seconds, right now, if he bothered trying, he could control another's energy for a span of 5 seconds, to get to fifteen seconds, he would need a couple years of practice so it doesn’t backfire on him. When He controls another's energy it causes trauma to that being's soul and emotions, this can cause periodic insanity for three days if the ability is used for long periods of time as they have massive mood swings and uncontrolled violence. At the moment this bout of insanity lasts, at most, a day though this doesn't work that well for sentient beings. On another note Morgas mainly uses his ability for sensing another being’s feelings, and he can physically move another being’s energy into another body, merging the two. He cannot do this in combat, for he needs to use his blood to make the correct sign on the ground, and then must channel his own energy into the circle, and it takes an hour to fully merge both energies with no side-effects. When a being has another being’s energy merged with it, that being can turn into, as he puts it, a shadow of the other being, this shadow mainly looks like a non-physical form of the being made up of condensed shadows, with the host floating in the middle, this shadow can attack and the transformation lasts, with enough practice, a day. Out of the, ‘transformation’, the host can use the abilities of the ‘tenet’(The other being’s energy, not the host’s), but can only use one ability at a time, they can also make their physical appearance change in small ways of appearance that the tenet had before (E.g. Yellow eyes, forked tongue, scales or feathers and such). These transformations can enhance the senses of the host, (E.g. forked tongue, heightened sense of smell). Small transformations in physical appearance can last up to a day, unless the host decided to just change the color of their eyes but not heighten their eyesight. Having another being’s energy forced into you can lead to many mental disabilities, like insomnia or PTSD, it can also take a toll on the host’s physical health, making them weaker. Morgos is trying to change this, but as such, hasn’t found a way too. The toll the ability takes on him is exhaustion, and weakening of his immune system (Which only lasts a couple months, depending on the amount and strength of the energy moved). All in all, the power in it’s self is pretty useless in battle, but quite useful in a diplomatic and experimental setting. The drawbacks of using this ability consist of an unstable emotions and energy exhaustion. Which can last from half a day, to a day, there is no sure way to know how long it'll last between those two timeframes. His highest level for monster capture is a medium threat, though he sticks to low-threat levels due to the volatile side-effects of having a strong being's energy shoved into another being's energy. (Those side effects usually cause the host to go insane, and kill themselves, quite counterproductive for his studies.)
Combat Style: Morgos rarely fights head-on, mostly leaving the dirty work to his experiments, but if he does have to dirty his talons, he usually does it in the form of assassination, be it poison, or a talon to the throat. He mostly avoids fights completely.

Background
History:  When Morgos was a hatchling, he was often ignored by his parents, in favor of his brethren. He was never strong, never powerful like his hatch mates, and often scorned by his family as his parent’s attitude wore off on his siblings. He slowly grew to resent both his parents and his brothers, and soon confronted his parents about it, and in retaliation got a gash running from his left hip, over his back to his right shoulder. He grew silent after that. As he grew older as the runt of the family, he discovered the wonders of poison, testing his findings on an assortment of low-level monsters, and hatched a plan of revenge. So, while everyone was resting, he slit his six brother’s throats, and injected a torturous poison into his parents, as they screeched in pain, he sat back and watched with cool detachment. The rest of the Nightwing tribe cast him out and he became a rouge.
He grew in intelligence and discovered his ability at the age of 20, afterwards, experimenting with it. He soon discovered an affinity in the creation and fabrication of ‘technology’ and ‘magic’. He also found that he was quite competent in magic, and didn’t care much for the drawbacks of using it, finding a high tolerance of it (this doesn’t mean the drawbacks didn’t happen). He soon craved the power, and craved finding ways to combine it with the science already discovered.
After a time of thought, Morgos decided to join another tribe, soon traveling to the territory in which the Order of Starlight mainly rules, and after a couple trails of trust, competence, and strength, became the Scholar of the Lightwing tribe. As of now he is still in the tribe, and has made some new advancements in science magics.


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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Wed Aug 29, 2018 1:32 pm

What do you mean by being able to control another being's energy? And exactly what "beings" can he use this on?

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Post by Morgos Jaakune on Wed Aug 29, 2018 5:41 pm

Baldirak Sapiens Draco wrote:What do you mean by being able to control another being's energy? And exactly what "beings" can he use this on?
Energy pools? Ya know, souls in a way? Basically the manifestation of emotions, which are souls in my opinion, I called it 'energy' because then it would seem less mystical sounding and more Scientific sounding. Beings are basically any creature, seeing as how we have a crapload of...characters? Races? one of those two. I was just trying to generalize so i wouldn't have to list out every single species Pyyria has.
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Wed Aug 29, 2018 6:50 pm

Keep in mind that you cannot control another person's character, including what they think or feel, without permission, so unless you have it, this ability can only be used in NPCs.

You state he has to study/practice the ability for a couple years before he could use it without it backfiring on him. What are the current drawbacks/weaknesses to using this ability?

Why is he sensitive to magic used by gods?

Him being a competent poison specialist should go under strengths, not abilities.

He's skilled at stealth and speed. How fast can he fly?

What's the highest level of monster he can capture?

And since he seems to be obsessed with magic, this should also be mentioned in weaknesses.

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Post by Morgos Jaakune on Thu Aug 30, 2018 3:32 pm

I updated, Did I get everything?
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Fri Aug 31, 2018 11:01 pm

"The drawbacks of using this ability consist of an unstable emotions and energy exhaustion. Which can last from half a day, to a day, there is no sure way to know how long it'll last between those two timeframes."

This should go at the top of the ability description after you mention there being drawbacks to using the ability.


"His highest level for monster capture is a medium threat, though he sticks to low-threat levels due to the volatile side-effects of having a strong being's energy shoved into another being's energy. (Those side effects usually cause the host to go insane, and kill themselves, quite counterproductive for his studies.)"

This should go under strengths after you mention him being skilled at capturing monsters.

"His body recoils when faced with divine magic, and his sensitivity to light doesn't help."

What do you mean by this? I'm not sure what you mean when you say he recoils.

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Post by Nevermore on Sun Sep 02, 2018 1:40 pm

What I mean by 'He recoils', It's a instinctive reaction to divine magic, That's all, instinct, it may be something in his past long-forgotten. So not even he knows.
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Post by Nevermore on Sun Sep 02, 2018 1:41 pm

Morgos Jaakune wrote:
Type of Character: Dragon
Link to Character List Page: http://www.rpgdragons.org/t5317-nevermore-s-character-list#65386[/url]
Personal Info

Name: Morgos Jaakune
Alias: Oilslick
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Homosexual
Personality: Morgos is sadistic, manipulative, and sly. He often sticks to himself and lives solitarily in his ‘lab’(*cough cough* torture Chamber *cough*).  He’s secretive, and never gives out info unless he has to, or it’s something to do with the tribe. His test subjects usually consist of humans and monsters, and his tests are often fusing two utterly different beings together in spirit, quite difficult and taxing, but he puts up with it. He has a multitude of other tests and experiments meant to better the tribe, and the alliance, but focuses mainly on his personal goals. He doesn’t quite care for his test subject’s pain, and sometimes revels in it. These experiments are often supported by humans, who think they can control the combination of a human and monster energy, and Morgos often gets requests from humans to fuse a child with a monster. He obliges just to see how the experiment reacts and to study it when it’s among humans. Most dragons hate humans, Morgos shows no particular emotion that associates with humans and monsters, really the most he sees them as is pawns, along with other dragons and lesser beings, but he puts up the façade of acting towards humans like any other dragon, when he’s among dragons and humans. Morgos cares not for mates and children, he’d only do something such as that for practicality and to further manipulate and worm his way higher. Only his test subjects and other beings who’ve visited his lab has seen what kind of dragon he truly is, and even that’s just a sliver of his insanity and sadism. He keeps his allies close and his enemies closer, and uses the quote “keep your friends rich and your enemies rich, and wait to find out which is which” ~Marvel’s Avengers
His intelligence his much higher than the average dragon, along with his competence in magic. He basically was a child, well, hatchling prodigy. He uses this intelligence in pursuit of science, building up on what little there was among Pyyria (his extent is nowhere near what we have irl), Science is a struggle, and he usually combines it with magic to further his studies and make up new spells.  
Fears: Morgos doesn’t fear much, he really only fears his experiments will be destroyed and the research burned, never to be recovered. He’s slightly worried that his work will be discovered, and considered a perversion of magic, or unacceptable (not that that will stop him, but still).
Strengths: Morgos is good at the fledgling subject of science and magic, those are his specialties, and they include poisons and toxins. He’s skilled at stealth and speed (75-80mph), and not being found. His manipulation of others is also near perfection, and his apathy helps him create no bonds to be exploited by others. Morgos is observant, and uses info he finds for his own exploitation. He’s average at gaining the trust of humans, and is skilled at capturing and containing monsters. He makes sure he’s tied to no specific being/tribes/alliances. This can also be used against him. He mostly stays in the Order of Starlight because one; His natural enemies, the Lightwings, are there, and Two; being in an alliance gains him temporary protection, and ease of access to resources he needs.
Weaknesses: He underestimates others, and is arrogant, thinking himself above his ‘pawns’. He’s sensitive to light and anything divine (Magic of gods, semi-gods, demi-gods, and Lightwings) His body recoils when faced with divine magic, and his sensitivity to light doesn't help. Threaten his work, and you can easily keep him under your control (but he’ll most likely backstab you in the future). You can easily sway him to your side if your offer is good enough for him. He lacks in strength, and his power is mostly not made for combat. He's obsessed with magic, which he knows can be used against him. He's skilled at capturing up to Medium-threat level monsters after years of practice for his experiments.

General Appearance
Height: 35ft
Scales: Pitch black, and takes the likeness of an oil spill when in the sun.
Eyes: Solid orange eyes with a silted pupil, seeming to be faintly covered by an orange mist,  that  seem to spin with other shades of oranges and a dash of black like a kaleidoscope, or writhing mist, and they also give off an eerie glow.  
Appearance: Lean, serpentine, toned, black mouth, stinger-like spike at the tip of his tail, and a composed posture, he also has spines resting on the back of his neck that he can rub together, creating a sound much like the rattle of a rattle snake. These same spines run along the ridge of his back and end midway down his tail. Runes adorn his body to help with multiple things, such as hiding his presence, keeping his mind intact, and controlling the flow of his special power. He often wears a perpetual smirk on his muzzle, unless the situation calls for respect and solemnity.  

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Lightwings
Inheritance: Purebred Nightwing that is taking residence in the Lightwing tribe.
Rank:  Scholar
Family: Deceased
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A (unless you count his experiments as his children, he sure does)

Skills and Abilities
Normal Abilities: he can exhale sleeping gas, blend in perfectly with the night, and has excellent night-vision.
Special Abilities: Morgas has the ability to manipulate other living being’s energy, this does not help him in combat….yet… but if he builds on it he’ll be able to control that being’s energy for a max span of 15 seconds, right now, if he bothered trying, he could control another's energy for a span of 5 seconds, to get to fifteen seconds, he would need a couple years of practice so it doesn’t backfire on him. When He controls another's energy it causes trauma to that being's soul and emotions, this can cause periodic insanity for three days if the ability is used for long periods of time as they have massive mood swings and uncontrolled violence. At the moment this bout of insanity lasts, at most, a day though this doesn't work that well for sentient beings. On another note Morgas mainly uses his ability for sensing another being’s feelings, and he can physically move another being’s energy into another body, merging the two. He cannot do this in combat, for he needs to use his blood to make the correct sign on the ground, and then must channel his own energy into the circle, and it takes an hour to fully merge both energies with no side-effects. When a being has another being’s energy merged with it, that being can turn into, as he puts it, a shadow of the other being, this shadow mainly looks like a non-physical form of the being made up of condensed shadows, with the host floating in the middle, this shadow can attack and the transformation lasts, with enough practice, a day. Out of the, ‘transformation’, the host can use the abilities of the ‘tenet’(The other being’s energy, not the host’s), but can only use one ability at a time, they can also make their physical appearance change in small ways of appearance that the tenet had before (E.g. Yellow eyes, forked tongue, scales or feathers and such). These transformations can enhance the senses of the host, (E.g. forked tongue, heightened sense of smell). Small transformations in physical appearance can last up to a day, unless the host decided to just change the color of their eyes but not heighten their eyesight. Having another being’s energy forced into you can lead to many mental disabilities, like insomnia or PTSD, it can also take a toll on the host’s physical health, making them weaker. Morgos is trying to change this, but as such, hasn’t found a way too. The toll the ability takes on him is exhaustion, and weakening of his immune system (Which only lasts a couple months, depending on the amount and strength of the energy moved). All in all, the power in it’s self is pretty useless in battle, but quite useful in a diplomatic and experimental setting. The drawbacks of using this ability consist of an unstable emotions and energy exhaustion. Which can last from half a day, to a day, there is no sure way to know how long it'll last between those two timeframes. His highest level for monster capture is a medium threat, though he sticks to low-threat levels due to the volatile side-effects of having a strong being's energy shoved into another being's energy. (Those side effects usually cause the host to go insane, and kill themselves, quite counterproductive for his studies.)
Combat Style: Morgos rarely fights head-on, mostly leaving the dirty work to his experiments, but if he does have to dirty his talons, he usually does it in the form of assassination, be it poison, or a talon to the throat. He mostly avoids fights completely.

Background
History:  When Morgos was a hatchling, he was often ignored by his parents, in favor of his brethren. He was never strong, never powerful like his hatch mates, and often scorned by his family as his parent’s attitude wore off on his siblings. He slowly grew to resent both his parents and his brothers, and soon confronted his parents about it, and in retaliation got a gash running from his left hip, over his back to his right shoulder. He grew silent after that. As he grew older as the runt of the family, he discovered the wonders of poison, testing his findings on an assortment of low-level monsters, and hatched a plan of revenge. So, while everyone was resting, he slit his six brother’s throats, and injected a torturous poison into his parents, as they screeched in pain, he sat back and watched with cool detachment. The rest of the Nightwing tribe cast him out and he became a rouge.
He grew in intelligence and discovered his ability at the age of 20, afterwards, experimenting with it. He soon discovered an affinity in the creation and fabrication of ‘technology’ and ‘magic’. He also found that he was quite competent in magic, and didn’t care much for the drawbacks of using it, finding a high tolerance of it (this doesn’t mean the drawbacks didn’t happen). He soon craved the power, and craved finding ways to combine it with the science already discovered.
After a time of thought, Morgos decided to join another tribe, soon traveling to the territory in which the Order of Starlight mainly rules, and after a couple trails of trust, competence, and strength, became the Scholar of the Lightwing tribe. As of now he is still in the tribe, and has made some new advancements in science magics.
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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Sun Sep 02, 2018 10:42 pm

Please try not to double post. You can always edit your previous post if you want/need to add something. So why did you quote your app?

So when magic is used against him by a god, he... instinctively recoils? Again, what exactly does it mean when you say he "recoils"? Do you mean he reacts as if someone/something pushed him? Does he become paralyzed? Just saying he recoils doesn't give someone an idea of what happens, so you have to be more specific.

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Post by Nevermore on Tue Sep 04, 2018 12:37 pm

Baldirak Sapiens Draco wrote:Please try not to double post. You can always edit your previous post if you want/need to add something. So why did you quote your app?

So when magic is used against him by a god, he... instinctively recoils? Again, what exactly does it mean when you say he "recoils"? Do you mean he reacts as if someone/something pushed him? Does he become paralyzed? Just saying he recoils doesn't give someone an idea of what happens, so you have to be more specific.
I didn't double post, I was editing it and clicked send, but then it double posted, and I couldn't do much about it.
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