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the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

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the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

Post by Orkev on Sat Jul 07, 2018 6:52 am

there where two crystal beast of great importance orchid the greatest of the crystal builders and Kendrick orchid mate was the historian of the crystal world and this was there story.there was a world of beauty that was by itself in a vast sea of darkness that giant crystal pillars that reach into the sky and islands that floated. the name of the world was centravina. the worlds heart was broken no one of the crystal world fix it not even orchid the best crystal builder of the the crystal world couldt fix it But you see this world would not last for much longer. Kendrick also tried to help find a answer only thing that he found was that the world had a sister planet that died before it could bare life.
you see the world was dying so the world started to move and create a portal for it people to leave to another world one that was young new fresh this world was called pyyira. Not all of the inhibitions where able to make it to this new world called pyyria. For you see the dying world did not know of the monsters that inhabited the portal and the world of pyyria all the two legged creatures of the dying world where killed in the portal while the great beast of crystal where dying to dieses, monster and hunger only two made it one female and one male the female name was orchid and the male name was Kendrick. they had a egg and left it in a tomb of the new world of the two legged to hatch the mother and father went back into the portal and died shortly ofter on the dying world.
Then the dying world final gave into death and so the world grew dark and the storms of ice lighting and thunder started to destroy the planet until the world was no more.
how do I know this it because I was there when the world was dying so with my last few pain breath I Kendrick the crystal tell this store.


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Last edited by orokiv on Sat Jul 07, 2018 8:27 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : a few spelling erros and a bit of broken rules that got by me)
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Re: the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

Post by Celestia on Thu Jul 12, 2018 9:24 pm

This shall not be considered for evaluation. This is more like just telling exposition and is super short. While this is non-canon I'd still advise against creating or modifying the lore and history of the world. Also you didn't use the correct story submitting format. Please refer to your mentor or one of the staff for assistance.

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