Dragons Roleplaying Forum
Hello! I greet all you guests warmly. Don't be scared, we won't bite! Us roleplayers are very active and have some experience. Our moderators and admins are always eager to help! We often hang out in the chatbox. So go on ahead, and join us today!

Log in

I forgot my password

Quick Links

Site Rules

Contact Staff

Celestia: astral@rpgdragons.org Baldirak: baldirak@rpgdragons.org

Latest topics
» =|:|+ Ruin +|:|= (Ready 4 Review.)
by Ruin Tue Mar 19, 2019 8:37 am

» The Hatchling in The Snow (Open)
by Snowblaze Mon Mar 18, 2019 8:03 am

» Blood Trail in The Sand (Open)
by Azorius Sat Mar 16, 2019 8:01 am

» The Search (Open to All)
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Mon Mar 11, 2019 4:08 pm

» |:|= Albino's Return =|:|
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Thu Mar 07, 2019 10:51 am

» The Mentor Program
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Sat Feb 23, 2019 3:59 pm

» Hi, everyone!
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Wed Feb 20, 2019 5:17 pm

» Comfort Zones (Hildrhilt)
by Hildrhilt Wed Feb 20, 2019 4:14 pm

» Father and Child Bonding Time (Cygnus/Sul and El)
by Súl Iolar Tue Feb 12, 2019 4:35 pm

» How to raise your dragons (Private Svad)
by Cygnus Sun Feb 10, 2019 1:56 pm

» Finaly Home(Private/Snowblaze)
by Snowblaze Sun Feb 10, 2019 12:23 pm

» Anguis Tenebris
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Sat Feb 09, 2019 3:39 pm

» The Hot Spot For Assassins (OPEN)
by Svadilfare Fri Feb 08, 2019 10:20 am

» Drakon the Pet
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Mon Feb 04, 2019 4:59 pm

» A Hatching [OPEN]
by Ptelea Mon Feb 04, 2019 1:16 pm

» the vulpine clans
by tvc member Thu Jan 31, 2019 2:42 pm

» Stricken with a Sickness. . . Or Something More? (Súl Iolar)
by Súl Iolar Thu Jan 31, 2019 10:44 am

» A Walk Through the Cold (Open)
by Snowblaze Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:25 am

» Alternate Origins: A Multiverse Adventure (Open to all)
by Azorius Wed Jan 30, 2019 12:12 pm

» Snowball
by Wake Mon Jan 28, 2019 10:49 am

» On the Hunt (Tharasis)
by Tharasis Sat Jan 26, 2019 1:43 pm

» Character Voices!!
by Wake Tue Jan 22, 2019 12:54 pm

» Phealyn
by Baldirak Sapiens Draco Sun Jan 20, 2019 8:30 am

» An unexpected encounter ( Private w/ Hildrhilt )
by Tharasis Sat Jan 19, 2019 6:35 pm

» Bit of a character builder
by Hildrhilt Wed Jan 16, 2019 7:20 pm

Who is online?
In total there are 8 users online :: 0 Registered, 0 Hidden and 8 Guests :: 2 Bots

None

Most users ever online was 110 on Mon Jan 25, 2016 3:47 pm
Affiliates

Our Buttons:

Our Affiliates:

the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

Go down

the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

Post by Orkev on Sat Jul 07, 2018 6:52 am

there where two crystal beast of great importance orchid the greatest of the crystal builders and Kendrick orchid mate was the historian of the crystal world and this was there story.there was a world of beauty that was by itself in a vast sea of darkness that giant crystal pillars that reach into the sky and islands that floated. the name of the world was centravina. the worlds heart was broken no one of the crystal world fix it not even orchid the best crystal builder of the the crystal world couldt fix it But you see this world would not last for much longer. Kendrick also tried to help find a answer only thing that he found was that the world had a sister planet that died before it could bare life.
you see the world was dying so the world started to move and create a portal for it people to leave to another world one that was young new fresh this world was called pyyira. Not all of the inhibitions where able to make it to this new world called pyyria. For you see the dying world did not know of the monsters that inhabited the portal and the world of pyyria all the two legged creatures of the dying world where killed in the portal while the great beast of crystal where dying to dieses, monster and hunger only two made it one female and one male the female name was orchid and the male name was Kendrick. they had a egg and left it in a tomb of the new world of the two legged to hatch the mother and father went back into the portal and died shortly ofter on the dying world.
Then the dying world final gave into death and so the world grew dark and the storms of ice lighting and thunder started to destroy the planet until the world was no more.
how do I know this it because I was there when the world was dying so with my last few pain breath I Kendrick the crystal tell this store.


                                                            The end


Last edited by orokiv on Sat Jul 07, 2018 8:27 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : a few spelling erros and a bit of broken rules that got by me)
Orkev
Orkev

Male Capricorn Tiger
Posts : 38
Reputation : 0
Age : 20

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: the dying world ( DP story submission for perspective contest )

Post by Celestia on Thu Jul 12, 2018 9:24 pm

This shall not be considered for evaluation. This is more like just telling exposition and is super short. While this is non-canon I'd still advise against creating or modifying the lore and history of the world. Also you didn't use the correct story submitting format. Please refer to your mentor or one of the staff for assistance.

_______________________


Quotes:
[15:53:21] Apolis : Yes, semi gods shall be treated with the uttermost respect of course!
Gala: UNLEASH THE FURY OF THE NIGHT!
[00:33:27] Abyss : Happy coming outta yer mum day~
[01:31:17] XaJjang : 90% of this site's "Metagaming" or "Powerplaying" is the opposite.
[01:31:26] XaJjang : It's jsut really badly worded posted, or jsut bad posts in general.
Celestia
Celestia
Goddess of the Moon and Stars
Goddess of the Moon and Stars

Female Scorpio Dog
Posts : 1437
Reputation : 43
Age : 24
Location : I have no idea where I am.

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum