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Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Darkflame on Fri Feb 24, 2017 7:22 am

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Type of Character:Dragon
Personal Info
Name: Darkflame
Alias: Darkness, Shadow or Shade
Age: 18 years
Gender:Female
Sexuality: Straight  
Personality:Darkflame is a loyal dragon to his Tribe, she thinks the other
ones are arrogant and weak ones, anyways she is kind once someone meets her,
she smetimes could be fierce, rude or cold, Darkflame likes to be with his friends
but always knows when she needs to be unfriendly, most of the times she is seem
serious, Darkflame can sometimes be stubborn but knows when she needs to behave. She, for being loyal, will do anything to protect her tribe, even
if the cost of her life, for her die for her Tribe is and big honor
Fears:
1.Death
2.Lose her friends
3.Her Tribe destroyed
Strengths:
1.Dark magic or fire
2.Think about her Tribe and her death family
3. Her strong scales in her body
4. The night
Weaknesses:
1.Thunderstorms
2. Light power


General Appearance
Height: 15 ft Mt
Scales:Her scales are black, spiky and black with some grey stone color
in the top
Eyes: Red fire
Appearance: Darkflame is a black dragon with
some holes in the bottom of her wings, she have large
claws reinforced with iron that she found, a large scar in her right eye
and left eye.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Night Wing
Inheritance: 1/4 Fire Wings, 1/3 Earth Wings, 13/12 Night Wing
Rank: Guard
Family:
Father:
Claw
Mother:
Sukio
Brother:
Shiro
Mate:N/A
Hatchlings:N/A

Skills and Abilities
Special Abilities: Dark fire ball: This is a combination of fire and darkness
Shadow guild: Thanks to her power she can control the shadows as she wants,
Dark Fire: This magic is for burn her enemy or she just uses this for fun.
Combat Style: She first, makes her opponent get confused and then uses
her dark fire to hit it and knock him/her out, she then bites it scruff fiercely, shakes it and throws it towards a wall or a rock, when the opponent is going to attack she
uses the shadows to dissappear and reappear in another place to attack her opponent, Darkflame uses her claws too scratch fiercely and make her rival bleed.
Sometimes her own magic drains her own strength, if she don't use it well.

Background
History:
She born in a place out of the Kingdom Pyrria, but close to Night Wings
her aprents leave the kingdom because they won't be bothered about their eggs, so they moved to another place, they lived in a cavern, that was fully of gas, ashes
and fire, her parents lived happy, the day they where born Darkflame and her brother where only htachlings that they had, the others died when they where still
on the egg, her parents were sad but happy that they could have at least 2 hatchling
the time passed and her parents taught her and her brother of the Kingdom of Pyrria and how to use their magic.

One day a band of rogues arrived to the cave
and claimed Darkflame as one of the rogues, but his father, furious,  because how
a rogue could claim his own daughter? he instanly attacked the leader of the band and the others attacked him back, her mother joined his mate in the battle, but the rogues outnumbered them, his parents died in the battleand the rogues take Darkflame as one of them, the leader ordered to kill his brother, he looked useless
to him, so it was.

Darkflame trained with them, by years, at the age of 16, she decided to kill the rogues to revenge her family, at the night she entered on
the cave where the rogues lived, Darkflame finsihed them one by one althought
she had gained scars in her scales. She hide the bodys of them and went to
the Kingdom to find the Night Wing's tribe, and to find shleter on them.
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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Fri Feb 24, 2017 9:07 am

Hi there and welcome to DRF! I'm Baldirak and I'll be reviewing your app today. So the first thing I noticed is you only have one weakness. Dark FIre uses magic so it should have a weakness, like draining your energy. And does she have any other weaknesses besides thunderstorms?

For your rank you put Guard?(meh ;-; Not sure what rank you want? If you need a list of NW ranks, we can certainly get you one. Smile

And finally you are 1/0 LightWing.. might need to change that. Let me know when you have made the changes above and I'll have another look. If you have any questions at all, feel free to ask!
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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Darkflame on Fri Feb 24, 2017 11:09 am

I'll be so happy if ya' send me a list of the ranks ^^

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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Celestia on Fri Feb 24, 2017 12:50 pm

The basics are
Citizen
Guardian which is a soldier.
Tracker which are spys or hunters.
Healer
and then Scholars

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Post by Darkflame on Fri Feb 24, 2017 6:14 pm

Thank you, Celestia! ^^

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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Tenebris on Fri Feb 24, 2017 10:27 pm

http://www.rpgdragons.org/t4386-the-ebonwing-potentate-hierarchy

Here is the ranks to the Ebonwing Potentate, however keep in mind the Ebonwing now comprise all the Nightwing lands so the initial information may be outdated but the ranks themselves remain the same.


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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Fri Feb 24, 2017 10:31 pm

Awesome, now one more thing. Can she use Dark Flame as much as she wants, or does it drain her energy?
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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Darkflame on Mon Feb 27, 2017 10:08 am

Bump

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Re: Darkflame- The Black Dragon

Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Mon Feb 27, 2017 10:29 am

I see you did mention Dark Flame draining her energy, but you put it under combat style. It should go under weaknesses. But as long as it's mentioned somewhere, I won't be too picky, especially with your first app.

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