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Post by Tinyspots on Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:48 pm

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Personal Info
Name: Star
Alias: The Sly Huntress
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Star is cunning, smart, and independent. She will find more efficient and effective ways of hunting if she feels like there should be and she doesn't really like getting help from other dragons even if she needs the help. She is also a really good problem solver and could be a great use to her tribe if they need smart dragons. She doesn't like to interact with many other dragons whether they are in her tribe or not. She is very shy in this aspect and having a conversation with her can get awkward. She can be stubborn and unwilling to do what she is told especially if it goes against what she thinks is right, but she will always eventually do what she is told by the upper ranked dragons, only if it is for the good of her tribe. Star can also get anxious, scared, and afraid easily, depending on the situation. If she had been dreading to meet with anyone with anyone who had royal power (whether for good or bad news), all her life, then suddenly put into a position in which she has to, she will be anxious and scared and try and get out of the situation. Once in the situation, she will most likely start to panic.
Interests: Flying, swimming, diving, food, treasure
Dislikes: Dragons she finds annoying or obnoxious, fighting, jungles, warm areas
Fears: Failing, getting in trouble, etc.

General Appearance
Height: 75 feet
Scales: Icy blue
Eyes: Teal
Appearance: Mainly like an Icewing, with a few scales going down the middle side of her neck, body and tail, that are slightly teardrop shaped, change color, and give off a small glow. She also has large wings (that have a slight glittery effect to them), webbed feet, almost non-existent gills, and abnormally long tail. She also usually wears a pouch on her wrist which holds any treasures she acquires, like the pearl necklace with the golden star she found in the waters off the coast of the Lightwings territory, in order for other dragons to not steal it from her, or for any royal dragons to take it away from her.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Lightwings
Inheritance: 3/8 Icewing, 2/8 Lightwing, 1/8 Seawing, 1/8 Nightwing and 1/8 Skywing
Rank: Tracker-Hunter
Family: N/A
Mate: Looking
Hatchlings: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Hunting, tracking, observing, ignoring other dragons, swimming, she can reach up to 80mph while flying, although she prefers to fly at around 60mph
Special Abilities: She can breathe a very bright, chilly, frostbreath. The frostbreath could temporarily blind the other dragon she is fighting if it is a specially bright day for 1 or 2 posts. The frostbreath on contact would feel like getting hit with a snowball that is made of ice. The frostbreath would only be slightly colder than freezing, making her frostbreath not very effective. The range for her frostbreath doesn't reach very far and is mainly used as a close range attack.
Weaknesses: Heat, fire, lava, isn't very strong
Combat Style: Even though she doesn't really like fighting much, she still has a way of fighting. Firstly, if the dragon she is going to fight doesn't know where she is, she tries to sneak up on them and quickly snap their neck like she does with prey. Next, if she gets spotted or confronted, she tries to stun or confuse the other dragon by flashing her changing scales and showing the underside of her glittering wings. Lastly, she tries to kill the other dragon by using her teeth, claws and light/frost breath. She prefers to move as quickly as possible so as to get hurt less and confuse the other dragon.

Background
History: N/A
RP Sample: Star had just returned from a swim. Her claws were stained bright red from the fish she had just caught. She had a strange fascination with the water just beyond the cliffs on the coast. She was sitting on a rock jutting up from the water near the coast and a few dead fish lay on another rock not far away. Star causally walked off the rock and into the water. Upon entering, she starting swimming with her head slightly above the waters surface. She looked around to see if she could spot any of the Lightwings nearby. She dove her head under the surface and causally started searching for more fish. She breathed in the silky, crisp, fresh water. Star looked about the desolate water happy that it wasn't crowded and filled with other dragons, coral, and other sea creatures for her to stumble upon or run into. She often come into the water to be by herself or to hunt. Sometimes she even slept under the water. On this particular day, the fish were even harder to catch than usual and she found herself wandering the waters depths not really paying attention to where she was swimming. Something shiny was poking up from the sand below her. She swam down and dug at the sand. She uncovered a thick, dark blue pearl necklace with a star made of gold in the center. She made a silent vow to keep it a secret from the Lightwings and every other dragon.


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Post by Sly on Sat Sep 24, 2016 4:55 pm

Hi Tiny,

Welcome to DRF! Have some cake! dragoncake

I am Sly, your somewhat friendly character mod, and I will be reviewing your app. Before you begin, I would recommend you give a brief look over our New Members Guide to give you a brief background on what goes on in this site. The Comprehensive guide to character creation is also a good way to give you an idea on how to create your characters.

And now for your app.

First of all, you are required to have a minimum of 5 sentences for your personality. Expand on this further.

Is there a reason why your character is an odd mix of 5 of 7 different tribes we have? Okay, so she looks like an Icewing, has webbed feet (Seawing), large wings (Skywing?), and chilly bright breath? (Icewing + Lightwing). Being of Skywing heritage is not necessary to have large wings, if that is what you're thinking, or Seawing heritage for webbed feet (unless one of her strengths is her swimming ability) but I'm also struggling to find any Nightwing trait of hers. Be sure to give your character the bare necessities, rather than excessive traits that does not relate to them much.

For your strengths, you are required to at least describe your character's speed and physical strength. I notice she is good at hunting and tracking. Does this mean she at least excels in speed but forfeits strength for such a trait? If so, be sure to give us her average and top speed. If her average speed is 80mph, then you will have to keep the Skywing heritage, but because you are not of purebred Skywing, you cannot have their maximum top speed (170mph). Due to the small inheritance of Skywings, I would probably accept no more than 90mph.

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Post by Tinyspots on Sat Sep 24, 2016 5:18 pm

She is an odd mix of the 5/7 tribes, because I wanted her to have the traits of the dragon tribes that I admired. For example, I wanted her to be a big dragon (why I choose her to be mostly Icewing and Lightwing), be able to swim well, and breathe underwater (why I choose her to have some Seawing). Also, the undersides of her wings are glittery (proof of her Nightwing heritage). Also, I thought that under personality, it said MAXimum of 5 sentences(I need to learn to read XD, and this cold I have isn't helping either). I don't think that she has any excessive traits about her. She is the perfect dragon for me to rp. Later on as I get used to rping as a dragon, I may make a new dragon that's more basic. I will also edit what is required.


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Post by Sly on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:01 pm

I see...

Nightwings arent known for their glittery underbellies though so that is redundant. Be sure to make it clear that she is a good swimmer and such, because once your app is approved, you cannot bring in extra information not detailed here or made clear enough for readers such as myself.

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Post by Joyce on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:05 pm

Sly she meant she was going to edit it right now, but she had to do some chores and stuff so right now she is nearly done with the editing. I know this since Tiny is my twin sister. Razz

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Post by Hirotsukiro on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:24 pm

Really that this app got reviewed before mine, even though mine was posted yesterday? Sigh.
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Post by Sly on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:38 pm

@Hiro,

Im sorry to hear about that but please bear in mind that we are currently understaffed and are mending some issues so your app would have disappeared from recent topics. To get our attention again, please bump your app. Please dont post in another persons app to complain about this as this is an inappropriate place for it.

PM the staff or speak to them in the cbox if you have any issues.

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Post by Joyce on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:43 pm

Well she has asked around on the chat I think like I did. Also its best if you change the topic name to something obvious like have your characters name then in parenthesis say "Needs Approving" this draws the mods eyes to all the applications that need approving so they can read them and maybe accept them.

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Post by Tinyspots on Sat Sep 24, 2016 6:52 pm

Edited!

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Post by Sly on Sat Sep 24, 2016 8:22 pm

You still need to describe her physical strength in the strengths category. How much weight can she carry at most and how strong are her strikes?

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Post by Tinyspots on Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:38 am

I don't know her strengths or how much weight she can carry, because I don't know what the average damage an icewing or lightwing inflicts or how much weight they can carry. ;-; Also, Nightwings have glittering undersides of their WINGS not their bodies. Just wanted to point that out because it seems that you misread. ;-;

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Post by Sly on Sun Sep 25, 2016 4:22 pm

Okay...

Just ignore the strength bit then. It should seem alright as the app is.

I dont see where in our guide that states all Nightwings have glittering underside of their wings. Hence, it still seems redundant to me that you need to include a Nightwing heritage regardless.

Either way, you can freely edit that one out or not while you wait for the second approval.

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Post by Aero Dynamic on Sun Sep 25, 2016 4:31 pm

NightWings with glittery wings is from Wings of Fire, Sly.

Special Abilities

'She can breathe a very bright, chilly, frostbreath.'

Could you explain this a bit more? How cold it can reach, how far it is shot, what effect it has on a dragon, ect.

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Post by Tinyspots on Sun Sep 25, 2016 5:38 pm

Bump!

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Post by Aero Dynamic on Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:26 pm

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