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Post by Sicarius on Sun Jun 12, 2016 10:11 am


Personal Info
Name: Sicarius
Alias: None
Age: 88
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality:

Fears: Swimming in any capacity, as you might imagine his body is not.. Water friendly.


General Appearance
Height: 24 ft tall, 72 ft long
Scales: Black
Eyes: Sicarius does not have visible eyes.
Appearance: Sicarius is technically hexapedal, as on his wings are another set of fully functioning claws that can act as legs, however they are typically folded up against his body, grasping his shoulders as seen above. Sicarius does not, in fact, have eyes, and instead uses long range, high frequency echolocation, meaning that the only one that can actually hear it is him, or those with the ability to hear that frequency. With this he is able to paint a picture of what is in front of him, and having used it quite literally every waking moment of his life he has long since reached the point to accurately pick out individual scales, pebbles, and sticks from a hundred meters away, at least. Sicarius's wingspan is large for his size, but nothing special.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Rogue.
Inheritance: 50% NightWing, 50% Lightwing
Rank: N/A
Family: Abandoned once he matured; assumedly they are dead.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: N/A

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Celestia on Sun Jun 12, 2016 11:35 am

First lets tone down your maximum speed to 110 kmh.

Despite my inherent dislike for Wyverns here at DRF they are on equal ground as dragons. That means equal intelligence and equal strength. The way you speak about them makes them seem like a lesser species.

This lasers breath may have no drop of but it needs to dissipate eventually. How long does it take to dissipate?

Chewing through organic flesh at such a high rate as well as the speed lasers are assumed to be traveling at this is too strong. Most LightWing lasers only cause mild burns on first contact and take some time to burn through flesh.

Your rp sample is staring intensifies. Here at DRF we don't like one liners and require posts to be at least a paragraph. I ask your rp sample to reflect this.

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Sicarius on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:12 pm

Bump.

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Celestia on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:18 pm

lol that rp sample


APPROVED 1/2

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Post by Sicarius on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:24 pm

And actually, Wyverns are viewed as lesser beings, which is why I emphasised the intelligence.

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Oculus on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:29 pm

One question about special abilities:
" The beam reaches lengths of about 6 meters, and can go in a straight line seemingly forever, but they really only go about 200 ft before dissapating."

The beam only goes 6 meters? Or does it go 200 feet? A little contradictory, unless you misworded a part of it. Bump when clarified or tell me in cbox

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Sicarius on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:41 pm

Bump.

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Post by Oculus on Sun Jun 12, 2016 12:43 pm

~ 2/2 APPROVED~

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Re: Sicarius

Post by Aero Dynamic on Fri Jul 29, 2016 12:19 pm

Out for edits 7/29/16
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Re: Sicarius

Post by Sicarius on Fri Jul 29, 2016 5:46 pm

Bumpmaybe

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Post by Aero Dynamic on Sat Jul 30, 2016 9:06 am

Could you add a personal weakness to your weaknesses? Then you should be good to go ^^
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Post by Aero Dynamic on Sat Jul 30, 2016 11:26 am

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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Fri Aug 19, 2016 10:11 am

Out for edits.
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Re: Sicarius

Post by Sicarius on Fri Aug 19, 2016 10:52 am

Bump.
Information about the tail is in appearence at the bottom, and he has two new weaknesses.

EDIT
Also changed his length to 120 ft to better represent his actual shape as shown by the picture I lovingly drew. <3 <3

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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:02 pm

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Post by Baldirak Sapiens Draco on Mon Jan 07, 2019 4:56 pm

Out for edits. Please put all changes in bold print.

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