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Post by Kenshin on Sun May 01, 2016 2:41 am

”Kenshin”:
”Mahwus”:
Personal Info
Name:Kenshin Ferrer Huang (Mahwus Aliwai)
Alias:The Impartial Judge, The One in Grey (The Mad Man)
Age:1005 years
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Heterosexual

Personality:Kenshin is a relatively calm and easy going sort of guy who tries to ease his way through hardships. He always seems a bit forgetful whenever others ask him questions. He also appears to be detached from this world and is somewhere wallowing in a different reality that no one can see. He’s pretty much a very hard-to-read character.

“He always seems a bit forgetful”, this is his impression that he wants to give to throw people off his real personality, though the fact that he’s created a facade for himself, already shows bits of his real self. He’s an actor and knows how to hide what he knows. He’s not forgetful either, he’s just trying to forget what he knows as he knows a lot. He’s not an easy person to like, at least he isn’t after you know what a manipulative and controlling character he is. He puts on masks to hide his real feelings and acts according to the feelings of others and what sort of expression and mood would be appropriate. He is quite calculative and precise.

“He also appears to be detached from this world and is somewhere wallowing in a different reality”. This is quite true as he is not very accepting of the harsh experiences one has to go through to survive in this world, so he tries to escape with his mind, causing him to have a very vivid imagination. He’s also someone who tries to prevent fights at all costs as it only brings bad memories to his mind and he remembers things from similar events easily. To someone who’s barely known him’s view, it would appear as if he is a peacemaker doing things for other’s good when in reality it’s for his own benefit. He is a selfish character.

Apart from his calm state, he has a side that is a manic, excitable at the very sight of living and dead beings alike. This side of him is dangerous, unpredictable and absolutely trigger-happy when it comes to spilling blood. It is a side that is known as his darker, scarred and sadistic personality, only to be awoken when Kenshin forgets the world he created in his mind. This darker side is known as Mahwus.

Mahwus is an absolute sadist and a bully, someone who no one would want to meet. There isn't a shred of kindness in this personality as he does things just for fun. To actually engage in a proper conversation about the weather would prove difficult as Mahwus only wants to kill and destroy. When he is in control, chances of a massacre is quite possible unless a dragon is able to put him down for a few hours.

For a nicer side of him, he can sympathise with others easily even if he doesn’t show it. In general, he’s not a nice character.

Interests:

  • Justice
  • Reading through past crime cases and problems
  • Mediating fights

Dislikes:

  • No one hearing him out
  • Remembering painful things
  • Having to accept the bad

Fears:

  • To have to live through his worst moments again
  • Being awakened from his calm state


General Appearance
Height:50 feet [head to ground], 88 feet [head to tail]
Scales:His scales are able to flare up causing it to become spiky and are grey in colour. Hints of gold, yellows and whites can be seen under bright sunlight. (Mahwus’s scales are completely white and grey in colour, in contrast to Kenshin’s dark grey scales)
Eyes:Dark blue (Dark red)

Appearance:Kenshin has a rather grim appearance as his scales are a dark, pale grey colour which however can act as a mirror under strong sunlight, even revealing the hidden tints of pale yellows and whites at the tip of his wings. His wings have white feathers at the edges and look a little more bird-like than dragon or wyvern-like. His horns don’t head to the back but instead curves inward from the side of his head, along with small spines at the side of his head. His wingspan is 70 feet wide and his teeth aren’t as sharp as the average dragon’s due to the fact that he’s only eaten trees and bugs throughout his life along with the occasional fish, but it can still give a nasty wound if enough pressure is applied. His neck and back is also covered in numerous scars that he claims to have forgotten ever having.
(Mahwus has a slightly different appearance from Kenshin. The feathers on his wings turn a dark grey and his horns no longer curve inwards, but head straight out and back. The rest of his appearance still remain the same as Kenshin, other than the colour and horn changes)

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Rogue (He claims to have forgotten which tribe he stands) //I'll probably put him in LWs in the future//
Inheritance:LightWing + NightWing hybrid with some SkyWing lineage (½ NW, ¼ LW, ¼ SkW)
Rank:Self-acclaimed Mediator (Self-Acclaimed Freelance Assassin)
Family: He claims to have forgotten his family(1/2 LightWing 1/2 SkyWing Father, NightWing Mother)
Mate: None
Hatchlings: None

Skills and Abilities
Strengths:

  • High Concentration (Kenshin) – Due to the fact that he is always making sure he is calm to prevent Mahwus from coming out, his concentration abilities are quite commendable
  • Creativity
  • Individuality and assurance of himself – Despite his strange personality(ies), he is confident of himself and is not bothered by thoughts of others
  • Reflexes (Mahwus) - When Mahwus is in control, he becomes a lot more alert and awake thanks to the adrenaline rushing through his veins. This allows him to notice things and act on them quicker than Kenshin would.

Special Abilities:

  • Amnesiac Lightbeam: Using the sunlight and his mirror scales, he can use an ability that was inherited through his his family. This light when aimed directly at someone’s eyes or head facing forward at him, can cause the victim to suffer a slight memory loss, forgetting the events that occurred either recently or in the past, depending on the victim. This ability can only be used under direct sunlight or as long as there is light. However it’s effectiveness varies on the strength of the light and where Kenshin is facing. If under direct sunlight, the light beam is able to cause the victim to forget at least an entire day's worth of memories, if under sunlight covered by a translucent material and the light has been dimmed, the light beam is less effective, only capable of erasing 3 hour's worth of memories. The beam doesn’t reach very far as it only goes as far as 2 and a half metres. He shoots this beam out of his mouth, but it can only be used once every 4 hours.

  • Calm Aura: A natural born ability that Kenshin wields. He cannot control this ability as it hangs lightly around him 24/7. Anyone who speaks to him tend to get a bit too relaxed, unless they’re full of aggressiveness and anger, then it won’t really work

Mahwus's Ability - Toxic Memory: Mahwus breathes out a thick black smoke that engulfs the victim, causing them to relive their darkest secret and most painful memory for a whole 5 minutes. However, the victim must be immobile before the smoke's abilities can completely be placed into effect. It can also be dispersed by wind quite easily as it is only a gaseous substance.
(Note: Mahwus CANNOT use Kenshin's abilities at all, no matter what as he is the shadow version and an alternate personality of Kenshin)

Weaknesses:

  • Inconsiderate – Both Kenshin and Mahwus don’t really have much regard of the feelings of others
  • Lazy (Kenshin) – Kenshin always tries to find some way out of things, even to drastic measures like using his Amnesiac Lightbeam on others
  • Untrustworthy and unreliable (Kenshin and Mahwus) – Because of his overly calm attitude and constant weaselling out of tasks, it is hard to really trust the two personalities with a secret or a really important job
  • Slow Movements(Kenshin) - Kenshin always has rather delayed actions and it is quite easy to take him down thanks to his slow speed. Despite being so small, his reflexes and speed are quite slow.
  • Impulsive (Mahwus) - When Mahwus is in control, he tends to get ahead of himself too quickly and acts on his emotions. He does not think things through properly at all and has a tendency to charge into conflicts and situations without thinking things through

Combat Style:Kenshin is graceful when it comes to combat and he always looks as if he were dancing as he taunts the opponent while taking opportunities to inch closer and closer. Before the opponent realises it, he would strike from behind. This is only if he does not have a weapon though. For fights that do not mind a weapon, he uses a mechanism made from metal, shaped like tusks which he places inside his mouth and secures it like a bar. He then charges with the metal tusks.
(As Mahwus, his combat style is no longer as discreet, but is erratic, jerky and unpredictable. Any means to shed blood is used as Mahwus)

Background
History: Due to a traumatic incident that had happened, Kenshin had completely forgot the existence of his parents. Now, every time he attempts to remember them, his perception of a flawless reality gets distorted and Mahwus then takes over.

Who Is Mahwus?
Mahwus is the alternate personality of Kenshin, only allowed to be awakened when Kenshin remembers the incident that happened. The two being opposite personalities, Mahwus is excitable and a lot more maniacal and blood thirsty. He does not seek for peace, unlike Kenshin, but instead to disrupt it. While Kenshin forgets the past, Mahwus remembers it. For Mahwus to retreat back into Kenshin, the body hosting the two personalities must fall into a deep slumber to allow time for the two to reconcile and allow Kenshin to take control of his own body again. However, when Kenshin is awake, he has absolutely no knowledge of his second personality, as he has a reflex to forget events that had happened.

(I'll be fleshing out his past a lot more in a separate topic as it's still in the works)

RP Sample: Kenshin stared out into the open space before him, covered in grey and black. He tilted his head in thought, something seemed familiar to him. A voice then interrupted him and he looked towards the voice. "Yes?" he called out, but did not move from his resting spot.


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Re: Kenshin Ferrer Huang (Mahwus Aliwai)

Post by Aero Dynamic on Sun May 01, 2016 10:33 am

Hello there. I'm Aero, a forum moderator. I'll be reviewing your app today.

First of all, is this one character or two characters? It is very unclear here, considering Mahwus doesn't show up in personality and it is mostly focused on Kenshin. If this is two different characters, you have to make two separate apps for them. If not, you have to mention somewhere that he has two personalities or something along those lines.

Tribe Information and Status

'Officially LightWings (He’s forgotten which tribe he stands, but he has a slight idea)'
Did he lose his memory somewhere? And also, is he a LightWing or a Rogue?

This also goes for Family, Mate, and Hatchlings. How could he not remember unless he lost his memory? Please mention this if he did somewhere. I doubt you'd be able to forget if you had a mate and hatchlings.

Special Abilities
'Using the sunlight and his mirror scales, he can use an ability that was inherited through his his family. This light when aimed directly at someone’s eyes or head facing forward at him, can cause the victim to suffer a slight memory loss, forgetting the events that occurred either recently or in the past, depending on the victim. This ability can only be used under direct sunlight or as long as there is light. However it’s effectiveness varies on the strength of the light and where Kenshin is facing. The beam doesn’t reach very far as it only goes as far as 2 and a half metres. He shoots this beam out of his mouth. '

How often can he use this ability? If he was standing in the light could he rapid fire this, ultimately causing all of their memory to be gone? You need to put a limit saying how often he can use this ability.

Also, you mention that 'it’s effectiveness varies on the strength of the light and where Kenshin is facing. ' but what do you mean by that? Explain this more please.

'Blood Light - Only Mahwus is able to use this ability. He shoots out two thin rays of dark red light from his eyes, engulfing the opponent in a painful, searing heated light beam that cuts into their scales and constricts them, burning away their scales. However, the beam only works under moonlight and is instantly canceled out the moment the moon's light is blocked out. The heat of the beam depends on the brightness of the moon and works best when the moon is shining extremely bright. The beam only reaches as far as a metre and no further. '

This is way too OP. The moon's light could be on them for hours in some cases, easily enough to kill them. This is also way too strong for a hybrid's power. Maybe if he was a full LightWing, but even then it'd still be too strong. Either remove or tone this down.

Weaknesses

We need some real weaknesses here. While these are considered weaknesses, they don't give any information on any weak spots on your dragon. How is another dragon supposed to defend themselves or be able to beat you in a fight? Please add real weaknesses.

RP Sample

Please add one here. We just like to know how you RP. At least 5 sentences would be great.

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Post by Kenshin on Sun May 01, 2016 6:53 pm

I have added weaknesses and strengths and made what Mahwus is clearer. Also exchanged Blood Light for a different ability. History has also been added.

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Post by Aero Dynamic on Sun May 01, 2016 7:25 pm

Thanks for changing all of that ^^

Personality

I probably forgot about this earlier but would you mind adding a bit for when Mahwus takes over?

Inheritance

This one might be a little nitpicky, but it says that his parents are LightWing and NightWing, neither of which hold SkyWing blood. Aero is 50% NightWing and 50% Skywing, and had a 25% NightWing, 25% Lightwing, and 50% SkyWing with someone else. So, just putting one or both of the parents as half would be great Razz
Urg, I sound so picky sorry.

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Post by Kenshin on Sun May 01, 2016 7:48 pm

Added in a small section about Mahwus and edited the family part

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Re: Kenshin Ferrer Huang (Mahwus Aliwai)

Post by Aero Dynamic on Sun May 01, 2016 7:49 pm

Approved~
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