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Post by Heinaus on Mon Feb 29, 2016 5:33 pm

Name: Heinaus
Alias: "Anonymous"
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality: Heinaus, when she is comfortable with her surroundings, can be one of the kindest dragons. However, when she is put into a situation in which she doesn’t feel comfortable at all, she can become viscous, attacking with great agility and calculation. She is wary nearly all the time because she hates to be in new situations, which she finds herself in often. However, to help her overcome this wariness, she has a few "pets" which keep an eye out for her and to protect her, which is one reason why she loves them.

Most of the time, when she is in a situation which she is familiar with Heinaus is a rather confident dragoness. However, even in these situations, she can have her moments of uncertainty. When she is feeling a bit uncomfortable with the situation, she can act a bit snappy, angry and vicious.

Heinaus usually prefers to mask what she is feeling from others, preferring a barrier in order to hide her sometimes embarrassing emotions. However, this being said, she can sometimes lose control of her barrier, which lets her emotions cascade around her. This causes her crystal which she wears changes colour in accordance to what she is feeling. For example, a more vivid pink if she is embarrassed, a dull blue if she is sad, ect. Heinaus is a dragon who will listen, and can often see the good in dragons-even the most wicked dragons she can see the good in. She has learned to enjoy the company of the other dragons who she meets, but only if she thinks that she can trust them that is. She often will greet strangers with the appropriate amount of kindness, so that they will not think that she is a hostile dragon.
Most of the time, she is VERY happy, especially around certain dragons. She can be cheerful to about any extent around others, but prefers to express it in a decent manner.

Interests:
-She loves her families, and thinks that anyone who has one is extremely lucky, and she really enjoys having her own later in life.
- She truly just likes to read, and physically train her body most of the time, but at other more relaxing times, she will often sprawl across the rich green grass and gaze upon the sky in bliss as she really enjoys nature.
-Children, because she thinks they are the most wonderful things in the world.
- She reads a lot of books when she has the time to do so, and she mostly reads on her "pets", which protect her at all times.
-She loves to sometimes just fly, walk, or just simply sleep
-She also loves looking around and observing the nature around her.
Dislikes:
-The thoughts of her/her family's death
-Idiots because she cannot deal with their incompetence.
-She also hates dragons that think they're better than everyone

Fears: Losing her mate/best friends

General Appearance
Height: 26 feet
Scales: She is a dark pinkish color, and they seemed to have smoothened over time.
Eyes: Her eyes are a dark purple
Appearance: Her appearance comes as a pinkish shade of scales, along with her spikes down her back, she has spikes which grow out the front of her shoulders and two curled horns around her neck. She also has a black bag that she has around her neck, which she keeps her findings that interest her in. She also has a large pair of magnificent wings which can easily keep her in the air.
She is also accompanied by a few strange creatures, that she calls "Vardons". These Vardons also protect her, for her and alert her to any danger that she might stumble into. Vardons are also her known as her pets.

Vardons: These creatures are about the size of a newborn hatchling, they are yellow, with many grey/black spot around their coats of fur. They also have claw-like structures jutting out of their shoulders. Their glowing green eyes allow them to see in the dark, for better hunting.

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Rogues, but she originates from the LightWings.
Rank: To be earned/decided.
Inheritance: Pure Lightwing. (She will become part SeaWing once she is officially Draken's mate. Arkhor will change her looks and I will change them accordingly)
Family: Heinaus never met her family as they were taken away from her before she could meet them.
Mate: N/A
Hatchlings: Lunar(Adopted)

Skills and Abilities
Strengths:
Physical: Rarely, Heinaus will rely on her own strength to get herself out of a bad situation. Even though she has the strength to be able to this, she instead she can command her Vardons to attack for her and get her out of a tight spot. These creatures will savagely attack any dragons which she feels threatened by.
Mental: Heinaus is a very clever dragon, and seeming she is calm around things which are natural, she is able to withstand the normal torturing methods used upon dragons. Being the clever dragoness she is, she is also able to get out of situations through thinking and reasoning.
Special Abilities:
"Vardons": She has about a thousand of these things in a mountain range, but only ten of them accompany her on her travels, acting like escorts or guards. They have tough skin, glowing green eyes, which they use to see in the dark, and razor sharp claws, which they use for shredding. They communicate with Heinaus through clicks, but she mostly uses hand gestures, and the occasional click.
Weaknesses:
Her crystal: While it would be good not to show her emotions on her scales, some still know the color codes for LightWings. So when the crystal is noticeably changed, others can know what she feels and can turn the tables on her in fights
Scales: Though camouflage is nice to have, it doesn't hide her entirely. Its like basic invisibilty, , but she uses the surroundings to do this. A ripple in her movement can cause others to see her.. She also can randomly change colours when her barrier brakes, and this can be horrible when she is being interrogated because it shows exactly what she is feeling.
Mental: Though she can resist really strong mental torture, she can only do it for about two hours. This is because it drains her to try and resist it, and after the 2 hour mark, she snaps to the torturers will.
Her "Vardons": Their weaknesses are great. They can die from most natural causes, such as burning or getting bitten. Their immune systems are extremely compromised, which is why they are able to die so often from infection. They travel with her at all times, so a lot of them die from the harsh terrain that they have to walk on, or they die defending Heinaus or fighting for her.
Combat Style: Her main style is using stealth to her advantage, preferring to ambush her prey.
However, when in a face to face situation, she will call upon her pets to attack her opponents while she is trying to hold them off. Her pets can normally do a rather good job of defending her and mauling her attackers.

Background
History: Her history is like a lot of others, but with a more cheerful touch.

Heinaus was a cheerful little girl, always happy and playful, even in the darkest of times. One day, while she was chasing a butterfly, she came home, only to her her parents, lying on the ground, lifeless. A group of EarthWings thought it would be fun to kill off a family of rogues. This sent her into an emotional confusion, making her burst out crying at the most random of times, same with laughing and anger. Later on, she was adopted by a group of creatures, known as Vardons, which then became her foster parents until adult hood. Once she reached the age of eighteen, she became their mother, in which they took her to a mountain range, where there were MUCH more of the creatures there. She has learned to communicate with them, mostly through gestures, but sometimes clicks as well.
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Sly on Mon Feb 29, 2016 7:16 pm

You are required to at least describe her mental and physical strength, including her pets' as well.

While I would accept ability-copying, ability-stealing is banned. Also, I would clarify the nature of the ability "stealing" you have pointed out, as it can be taken that Heinaus can also use those stolen abilities. As such, this is not even a weakness, but a limitation to her ability that she can only rob their abilities into her crystals, thereby disabling them from using it until the crystal breaks.

Even so, it doesn't change that disabling them like that is banned, even if they are minor abilities, as "minor" is very vague. She does not have an actual weakness as well, so I would suggest you change that.

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Heinaus on Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:13 pm

The improved version.

I explained her pets' weaknesses and strengths. I explained her weaknesses and strengths. And I switched the ability stealing out for something a bit more simple
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Sly on Mon Feb 29, 2016 8:17 pm

Physical strength refers to how strong is she physically, i.e. her muscles, size, bulk and speed. Not just how rigid is her scales. Mental strength is how skilful she is in strategising or using her head in any tough situations, not just how resilient she is against torture.

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Sly on Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:29 pm

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Mon Aug 15, 2016 10:05 pm

~Out for edits~

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Heinaus on Tue Aug 16, 2016 10:02 am

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Tue Aug 16, 2016 4:01 pm

what do vardon's do?

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Heinaus on Thu Aug 18, 2016 10:53 am

Why ask now? You never asked before. And I already explained that.
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Thu Aug 18, 2016 4:18 pm

How big are they? How strong are they? Why do they follow you around? How do you communicate with them?

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Kyrin on Thu Aug 18, 2016 10:16 pm

Oculus. I'm sorry, but why ask this, when you went over it after I edit, but not when I first made her? Its pretty evident they aren't big, I don't need much of a reason ob why they follw me, and they are not strong. They are like wolves or raptors, fighting in packs. This is all pretty evident, and I'm nit in the mood to argue. So, once you give me a good reason on why you ask this at this time, I will continue to question you. And I will give the same answers.
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Thu Aug 18, 2016 10:29 pm

I never approved your app before. Only sLy has. I asked as it is not described, and as you say you have thousands in reserve, they need to be described.

Now please do as I asked or I will just decline the app.

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Kyrin on Thu Aug 18, 2016 11:07 pm

They have been described... Appearance shouldn't matter as I barely use them now.  Why should I describe their size? Of course they would be about as big as a full griwn dragon's foot, or better yet a hatchling. And strength is already explained. Communication us simple. Through clicks and gestures. I really shouldn't need to explain THAT, because, communication can come in many different ways, so I portray it in rp. And if you look in Getting things together, me and Draken's topic, in the first couple pages, you might see that she was raised by the Vardons. She tgen became THEIR mother as she grew older. That would answer why they follow her.
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Thu Aug 18, 2016 11:17 pm

I don't see anything in history, nor anything about them communicating with clicks, gestures, or reason why they follow them on the app.
Appearance matters, as it is on your app, so it needs to be described.

Make all edits in app instead of excuses please.

Bump when edits are made.

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Locrisis on Fri Aug 19, 2016 9:35 am

Heinaus: "Bump"
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Oculus on Fri Aug 19, 2016 3:31 pm

Still need to explain why they listen to her, as I see no reason why an army of 1000 hatchling sized insects would.

Also need to include inheritance

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Kyrin on Fri Aug 19, 2016 5:32 pm

There is no inheritance option on here.... And seriously....? I'm not gonna be going into detail on how many there are... I already told you why they follow her.
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Post by Oculus on Fri Aug 19, 2016 5:51 pm

Not in the app, and look at new app. Need inheritance.

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[22:12:50 10/04/2016] @ Sly : Oreo does NOTHING!
[22:13:21 10/04/2016] @ Sly : Except to loterally c***block everything Sly does >:I

[23:20:28 10/04/2016] Aero Dynamic : Sometimes I'm full and sometimes I'm half and sometimes I'm not even there. What am I?
[23:44:45 10/04/2016] @ Sly : My dignity

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Kyrin on Thu Aug 25, 2016 1:00 pm

I need this looked at
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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Aero Dynamic on Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:20 pm

Inheritance

'Pure Lightwing. (SeaWing once she is approved and mates with Draken)'

When you say SeaWing, is she turning into a SeaWing or just joining the SeaWing tribe?

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Re: Heinaus, the LightWing Rogue

Post by Aero Dynamic on Wed Sep 07, 2016 3:55 pm

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