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Post by Sheildwing the Strong on Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:16 pm



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Name: Sheildwing
Alias: Good
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Personality: Sheildwing is normally a kind-hearted but sometimes depressed dragon. When he is depressed, he thinks about his long lost family, their deaths. When he is happy, however, he would go and do things that please him. For example, tease with herds of animals, swim, and sometimes, burn things (rarely). He would also eat plants, if no one is around, anyway.
Interests: Mentioned above, he would swim, mess with animal herds, or rarely burn things. He would also go fishing, not just for the fish. Unlike the rest of the dragons, he is the only one who likes to eat plants, but keeps this a secret from others. He also LOVES rainy days, although being a Firewing, as he loves to get wet.
Dislikes: He dislikes being controlled too much. He also dislikes dragons that try to kill him. Another thing he dislikes is the pack of Rouges that killed his family (other than his parents)
Fears: Sheildwing fears death, of course, as he is the only one left in his family, death of himself or his mate (when he gets one, at least)

General Appearance
Height: 35 ft.
Scales:  He has red scales, yellow scales on his underbelly, and orange
Eyes:  Blue and yellow eyes.
Appearance: Sheildwing has a triceratops-looking head. The rest of his body is the regular dragon like, red torso, orange wings, yellow underbelly, and blue and yellow eyes. He also has orange spines running down his back. He is 62 ft. long

Tribe Information and Status
Tribe: Firewing (Even though he is part EarthWing)
Rank: Firewing Guardian
Family: He had a family, but they are all dead. His parents died of disease, the others by a pack of rouges.
Mate: None yet (N/A)
Hatchlings: None yet (N/A)

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: He uses his crest-like frill as a form of defense, but his scales are also as tough as rock. He uses his horns as another way of fighting.
Special Abilities: His horns are loaded with venom (He's part EarthWing), he doesn't always use them, but will if he must. If the venom is injected, the victim will receive nausea and loss of balance for 5 minutes. Not only is he strong, but also smart, and can form strategies during battle. He is also a bit faster than the average dragon
Weaknesses: Even though his scales are very hard, his underbelly isn't. His underbelly is soft, so he avoids being hit there
Combat Style: Sheildwing's breath is fireballs, which leave a large explosion behind. He will circle his enemy(s) and fire his, well, fireballs at them until they are down. He also uses his horns, but only at must. If breath is used on him, he will block it off with the crest like shield he has on his head.

Background
History: Sheildwing was a very playful dragon in his early years. He was a quick learner. But then, when he was 18, his parents died of disease. The rest of his family was killed by a pack of rouges. He longs to seek revenge on the rouge pack since. Being the only one left in his family, he needs a mate in order to keep the family running. When he thinks no one is around, he would go over and eat some plants, but tells this to NO ONE.
RP Sample: After a long battle with an intruder, I got tired and went into the brush. When I made sure no one was around, I started to chow down on a bush.


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Post by Arkhor on Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:18 pm

Ok I only see 2 small ish issues

1. RP Sample (would be nice, doesn't have to be large. So it could be you describing a fight... or whatever)

2. For the toxic horns, I would maybe add a small defect or cooldown, also is the poison deadly or just for weakening?

Other then that I would say its good, so if you could edit that a bit then you can be approved Razz

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Post by Sheildwing the Strong on Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:30 pm

1. I'd say it'll be something like this: After a long time of fighting an intruder, I got tired and went off into the brush. When I made sure no one was around, I started chowing down on a bush.
2. The poison is weakening, but in a strong way. The victim will get nausea, lose strength, and also lose balance. It lasts for 5 minutes or how you want it to be.
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Post by Arkhor on Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:36 pm

1. you can use first person, but a lot of people use third but sure add it onto your sheet.

2. Yep I would say weakening would be fine, as long as it only lasts a short amount of time, go with 5 mins. I would say it only effects balance, therefore it would be harder for the opponent to hit you, which you can use to gain an advantage. But you it doesn't effect their strength so you can still get hurt.

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Post by Sheildwing the Strong on Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:39 pm

1. It doesn't really matter, anyway.
2. Balance loss and nausea would at least be fine. No loss of strength, but just that
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Post by Arkhor on Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:49 pm

Yep make sure to edit that. APPROVED

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Post by Sheildwing the Strong on Fri Nov 28, 2014 7:09 pm

Did the edit

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Post by Celestia on Fri Nov 28, 2014 10:29 pm

I'm afraid I'm going to have to pull this out of approval.

1. The minimum size for a firewing is 35 feet please adjust your height to match.

2. Venom poison and the sorts is exclusive to EarthWings. If you want to keep it then make note of being a halfbreed. FireWing and EarthWing.

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Post by Sheildwing the Strong on Sat Nov 29, 2014 7:59 am

1. Adjusted the height. He's 35 ft. now

2. Mentioned that too

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Post by Celestia on Sat Nov 29, 2014 12:50 pm

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